我写一封信给外国人,希望各位能帮帮忙检查,谢谢。

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第1个回答  2012-11-19
Dear Santa,
Merry Christmas!
I'm happy to write to you! (个人以为)
I come from another country.English is my second language, so my English isn't good enough,please forgive me.
When I was young,I often heard the Christmas Story. I wish I can watch you and your reindeer fly in/across the sky one day.So each year when Christmas comes,I always hang the Christmas stocking beside my bed.What makes me happy is whenever I wake up,I always receive presents that I want. I think it is given by you,dear Santa!So I'm writing to thank you.I won't tell you what I want this year,I hope you can guess it!When you write back to me, I still hope that you can send me a little gift before Christmas,such as a card,a little book,etc.
This is my first time to write to a Santa.I can imagine you sitting next to the reindeer in a hut located deep in the forest, and reading my letter! I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!I wish you a happy new year!(Sincerely.