第1个回答 2022-07-10
【审题指导】
本篇书面表达是一篇话题作文，要求考生根据图表内容以“我送过的一份珍贵礼物”为主题写一写自己送过的最好的礼物及其原因。写作时，人称应以第三人称为主、第一人称为辅。
【写作指导】
第一段：引出主题（已给出）
第二段：小组三个成员各自所送过的最好礼物及其原因。
第三段：我所送出的礼物及原因
【词汇】
had a discussion
进行了一次讨论
a valuable gift I gave
我送过的一份珍贵礼物
what we shared
我们所分享的
A valuable gift given by Bob was a bowl of soup to his parents.鲍勃送给他父母的一份贵重礼物是一碗汤。
considered it as a good gift
把它当作一份好礼物
to express his thanks and love to them
去表达他对他们的感谢和爱
gave a photo album to one of her good friends
给了她的一个好朋友一本相册
cherish every moment with her/him
珍惜与她/他在一起的每一刻
their friendship could last forever
他们的友谊可以天长地久
In addition
此外
sent her foreign teacher a piece of paper cutting
送给她的外教一张剪纸
paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture
能充分代表中国文化的剪纸
for me
对我来说
what I gave to my grandparents
我给我祖父母的东西
so busy that we can't meet each other often我们如此忙碌以至于不能经常见面
have video chats by smartphone
通过智能手机进行视频聊天
【参考范文】
In today's English class.we had a discussion on "A valuable gift I gave' '.Here is what we shared in our group.
A valuable gift given by Bob was a bowl of soup to his parents. In his opinion, he considered it as a good gift to express his thanks and love to them. Kate gave a photo album to one of her good friends because she wanted to cherish every moment with her/him, hoping that their friendship could last forever. In addition, Lily sent her foreign teacher a piece of paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture.
For me, what I gave to my grandparents was a smartphone. We don't live together and my parents are so busy that we can't meet each other often . However, we can have video chats by smartphone.