这句英文有没有错误

Question

Foreign trade operator or foreign trade merchandise which will give me more challenges and a wider development space, and at the same time improve my English and communication skill.
这是我求职简历里面的求职目标，不知这样写有没有语法错误或不对劲的地方，尤其是定语从句那句话，不知有没有错呢？请指正！

Answer 1

语法上没有错误。建议改几个词汇： give-bring； wilder-broader；and at the same time improve my English and communication skill——and improve my English and communication skills as well.

Answer 2

第一句话没有谓语， or并列两个主语，which引导定语从句，后and并列作用 后面一个完整句子。

Answer 3

Foreign trade operator or foreign trade merchandise which will give me more challenges and a wider development space, and at the same time they will improve my English and communication skills.

更多的发展空间 further development for personal growth

这么写更合适