将来（In the future） In ten years,I think I"ll be a repoter, I"ll live in shanghai last year and fell in love with it .I think it"s really a beautiful city.As a reporte, I think i will meet losts of interesting people, I think i will live in an apartment with my best firend ,Because i don"t like living alone,i will have any pet,I can"t have any pets now becouse my mather hates them,and our apartement is too *** all,So in ten yeaes, I will have many different pets.I might even keep a pet parrot! I will probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week i will look *** art,and probably will wear a suit.On the weekend,I will be able to dress more casually.i think i will go to Hong Kong on vacation ,and i might even vist Australia.
我认为1. 动笔之前，认真审题 《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。
怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。
审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 2. 围绕中心，拟定提纲 书面表达评分原则有四条： （1）内容要点； （2）运用词汇和结构的数量； （3）运用语法结构和词汇的准确性； （4）上下文的连贯性。
由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。
根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。书面表达，内容广泛，题材多样，要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。
如果是日记，要写清年、月、日和天气情况；如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。 3. 语言通顺，表达准确 （1） 避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。
几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 （2） 多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。
可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
（3）.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1） 语态、时态要准确无误。
2） 主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3） 注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4） 注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5） 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
标点符号特别注意汉英的不同，例如： 汉语 英语 A. 句号 。 . B. 省略号 …… … C. 顿号 、无 （4） 描写人物时，要生动具体，例如： 1） 外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2） 服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3） 内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4） 感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, *** ile, shout 等。 5） 动作描写：e, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
（5） 上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。
同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1） 表示并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, or … 2） 表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however … 3） 表示时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that … 4） 表示空间关系的过渡词：near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside … 5） 表示比较关系的过渡词：in the same way, just like, just as … 6） 表示对照关系的过渡词：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though … 7） 表示递进关系的过渡词： also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again … 8） 表示因果关系的过渡词：because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result… 9） 表示解释说明的过渡词：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually … 10） 表示强调的过渡词：in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important … 11） 表示目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to， … 12） 表示列举的过渡词：for example , such as … 13） 表示总结性的过渡词：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking … 4. 不会表达，另辟蹊径 中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。
如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。
（1） 迂回而行 当汉语词义不会用英语表达时，可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路，然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。
这样可有异曲同工之妙。 （2） 小词大用 汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。
下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用：take, have, get, make, e, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。 （3） 借花献佛 有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。
因为刚刚做过题，记忆犹新，那么就。
What do you want to do？ 你想干什么？ What are you going to do？ 你干什么去？ What's the big idea? That's my beer you're drinking. 你想干什么？你在喝我的啤酒。
Oh, marvelous! When do you think you'll go？ 太好了！你想什么时候去？ What do you want to do after class？ 你下课以后想干什么？ What do you want to do after graduation？ 你毕业后想干什么？ Go ahead and do what you like. 去吧，你喜欢干什么就干什么。 It's no use trying to steer the boy into a course of action that suits you, he'll do whatever he pleases. 说服孩子按你的意志去做是没用的，他愿意干什么就干什么吧。
"Do you mind telling me what exactly you are at？" “你愿不愿意告诉我，你究竟想干什么？” What do he want to be？ 他想干什么？。
当我长大后（When I grow up）
When I grow up, I want to be an engineer. I want to build a big house and a *** all house for my father and mother. We will live together.
There will be a garden and playground in front of the house. We will grow beautiful flowers and fruit trees in the garden. We will grow grass in the playground.
I will buy a big car. I will take my father and mother to many places.
译文如下：
当我长大后，我想成为一个工程师，我想为我的父亲和母亲建造一个大房和一个小房子.我们住在一起.
在房子前面有一个花园.我们在这里种上美丽的花朵和绿树.我们在地上种上小草.
我买一个大的小车，带上我的父母亲去很多地方.
What my friend used to do online ?Created multiple screen names.Since AIM was our life, we constantly created new screen names — some of us more than others. Couldn't we have just picked a normal screen name so we didn't feel the need to change it every five seconds, rather than screen names like glitrgrl88, dancer4lyfe45, messedcheerleadr, whatsammatta (These are screen names I actually had — no wonder I would always get sick of my screen names). And on top of keeping up with people's SNs constantly changing, we used multiple screen names at the same time. Remember the away messages that read 'brb going on other sn'? Yeah.As much as our parents may have disapproved of the immense amount of time we spent on the puter during our childhood, we actually learned a lot from it. Like, seriously. We learned to type insanely fast, which put us ahead of our parents' and grandparents' generation, technologically speaking. We learned a little bit of HTML from decorating our AIM profiles, subprofiles, and eventually our MySpace pages. And then there were free websites like Expage, which taught us a little about web design. At the mere age of 12 I was already building skills for my resume. Who knew?Talked to people who were not real/ people we didn't know.AIM was not around just to talk to friends. We had thousands of people on our buddy list and we sure as hell didn't have thousands of friends. We chatted with people we didn't know, but knew through friends (kind of). We went into chat rooms full of anonymous strangers so we could laugh at what was going on and answer the famous a/s/l question with fake responses (this normally occurred at sleepovers). We talked to SmarterChild, a 'robot' screen name we could ask anything and he would answer (kind of like an old school Siri). We IMed anything and anyone… and this worried our parents. It worked for Lifetime though, as they created many movies about dumb pre-teen girls who had relationships with strangers online that ended in death or unexpected crime scenes. Oh, AIM.Make dollz.。
Well, when I'm 20, I want to be a cool girl.To do something they once dared not do, to learn some skills they once did not know, and then to go on a trip.
First of all, I want to earn the first barrel of gold in life, and then I can go where I want to go.For example, go to Look at the snow in Palace Museum and go to Daocheng to feel the tranquility of the world and the scenery of nature.
And then I want to learn about things I think that interesting , like Photoshop, video clips.In this way, I can record and keep the things I like.
Finally, I want to learn a *** all foreign language, such as Korean, Japanese or French.In this way, I can go abroad on the journey, no longer because of the language barrier caused by munication problem.
I hope these *** all goals can be achieved.And I hope we can all be better ourselves.