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Question

Dear professor li,
I am pleased to inform you that we are organizing a speech contest on 6-7 january 2013 inclass two grade three.
You are invited to participate in this important speech contest as our judge.we have twelve players and you need to give those players who take part in the speech contest a mark and make a impersonal evaluation upon the currency of the speech contest.should you be interested .please let us know at your earliest convenience as soon as possible so that we can relevant arrangement upon condition.
Looking forward to seeing you in this speech contest.

Answer 1

Dear Professor Li,

I am honoured to inform you that we are organizing a speech contest during Jan.06-07, 2013 in Class Two, Grade Three.

We would like to invite you as our judge, where you are expected to rank the twelve players with marks, and provide evaluation during the process. We hope that you would be able to join us on the mentioned dates.

We are looking forward to your soonest confirmation by return.

Many thanks in advance.

Yours Sincerely,
xxx on behalf of Class Two, Grade Three