一段中文文字求翻译成英文 高分~~~中等难度

Question

尊敬的Steve Jobs先生，
您好。
我是来自中国的一名初学开发者，我对Apple inc.有几个建议。可能不一定正确，但我希望Steve Jobs先生能重视。
骇客越来越疯狂，Jailbreak工具越来越简单。从要经过Mac/PC连接进行Jailbreak，到现在无需连接Mac/PC，仅仅用Safari登录一个网站，拉动解锁条就可以进行Jailbreak。这也说明iOS作业系统的防御有漏洞，如果给不法分子利用了这些漏洞，那我们的信息安全将被威胁。我希望Apple inc.能建立一个部门，专门试图攻击iOS作业系统和听取外界的相关报告，查出漏洞并尽快修复。使我们的信息安全得到保障，也保障我们开发出的应用程序尽少被盗版。
还有，iPhone 4终于在香港发售，但销售情况非常槽糕
帮别人问。。

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Steve Jobs,
Hello.
I am from China, a beginner developer, I have a few suggestions to Apple inc, maybe it is not correct, but I hope you Mr. Steve Jobs can pay attention to it.
Hackers getting more and more crazy, Jailbreak tools are more and more simple. from through the connection of Mac/PC to connection-free to jailbreak, only by using Safari to enter a Website, after slide the unlock button you can easily jailbreak it. This also indicates that defenses of iOS have the loopholes, if these loopholes the hackers can easily find, in that case our information security will be threatened. I hope that Apple inc. can establish a department, for dedicated to trying to attack iOS operating system and listen to the relevant reports from outside also identify vulnerabilities and fix it as soon as possible. That will be ensure our information security will be well protected, and applications we developed will be protected also from pirated.
and although iPhone 4 finally available for sale in Hong Kong, but the sale situation are very bad.
辛苦坏了，检查了一遍，应该没大问题，他能看懂， 希望他能回你，哈哈。

Answer 2

试试。
Dear Mr.Steve Jobs,
Nice to send an email to you.
I'm a novice developer from China,and there's some suggestions I wanted to say,for the development of Apple inc.Those infomation would be of great importance for your company.

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话说你真的想发过去？

Answer 3

Dear Mr. Steve Jobs,
Hello. I am an amateur developer from China, and I have some advice to share with Apple inc.. They may not be flawless, but I hope that they can be taken into your concern.
Crazy hacker are developing easier ways to jailbreak by going to certain websites （请具体说明什么网站） using Safari and drag the (unlock code? 请具体说明解锁条是一个什么性质的东西). This proves that iOS's anti-attack system has fatal flaws. I hope that Apple inc. can set up a department that specializes in attacking the iOS system and gathering information (请具体说什么报告) from users(? 外界具体是什么，是用户还是某些机构？）， so that they can find out what the flaws are. In this way, information security can be guaranteed and bootleg softwares can be avoided.
P.S. iPhone 4's sales in Hong Kong doesn't seem to go well.

老实说，您要是给Jobs写信提建议，一定要具体，否则对方无法对症下药，因为这里所说的问题美国人是不懂的，他们那边没人盗版。此外销量不好就不用提了吧，各地的销售情况总部都应该知道。。。

Answer 4

Dear Mr. Steve Jobs,

How do you do! I am come from China's one to begin studies the exploiter, I have several suggestions to Apple inc. Possibly not necessarily correct, but I hoped that Mr. Steve Jobs can take seriously. the hacker is getting more and more crazy, the Jailbreak tool is getting more and more simple. From must carry on Jailbreak after the Mac/PC connection, does not need to the present to connect Mac/PC, uses Safari to register a website merely, the drawing solution locking bar may carry on Jailbreak. This also explained that the iOS work system's defense has the crack, if has used these cracks for the unlawful element, then our information security will be threatened. I hoped that Apple inc. can establish a department, attempts to attack the iOS work system and the hearing outside related report specially, finds out the crack and repairs as soon as possible. Enables our information security to obtain the safeguard, also safeguards the application procedure which we develop to be least is pirated. also has, iPhone 4 sell finally in Hong Kong, but sales situation unusual are terrible!

Your Sincerely；
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Answer 5

Steve Jobs, the respect Mr.
Hello.
I am from China a beginner developer, I have to Apple inc. Several Suggestions. May not necessarily correct, but I hope Mr. Steve Jobs can seriously.
Hackers Jailbreak crazy, and more simple tools. Through the Mac/PC from Jailbreak connection, until now no connection with PC, only the Mac/Safari, pull a web log is Jailbreak can unlock. This also explains the iOS operation system, if a loophole in defence to use these loopholes outlaws, then we will be the information security threats. I hope to establish an Apple inc. Department to attack operating system and listen to outside iOS related reports, and soon found vulnerability. Our information safety, ensure we develop applications do less piracy.
Still, the iPhone 4 in Hong Kong finally put on sale, but the sales situation very bad
机器翻的......

Answer 6

Respect Mr. Steve Jobs, hello. I am come from China's one to begin studies the exploiter, I have several suggestions to Apple inc. Possibly not necessarily correct, but I hoped that Mr. Steve Jobs can take seriously. the hacker is getting more and more crazy, the Jailbreak tool is getting more and more simple. From must carry on Jailbreak after the Mac/PC connection, does not need to the present to connect Mac/PC, uses Safari to register a website merely, the drawing solution locking bar may carry on Jailbreak. This also explained that the iOS work system's defense has the crack, if has used these cracks for the unlawful element, then our information security will be threatened. I hoped that Apple inc. can establish a department, attempts to attack the iOS work system and the hearing outside related report specially, finds out the crack and repairs as soon as possible. Enables our information security to obtain the safeguard, also safeguards the application procedure which we develop to be least is pirated. also has, iPhone 4 sell finally in Hong Kong, but sales situation unusual Chinese sponge cake