鲁迅《狂人日记》小序的翻译

Question

某君昆仲，今隐其名，皆余昔日在中学时良友；分隔多年，消息渐阙。日前偶闻其一大病；适归故乡，迂道往访，则仅晤一人，言病者其弟也。劳君远道来视，然已早愈，赴某地 候补⑵矣。因大笑，出示日记二册，谓可见当日病状，不妨献诸旧友。持归阅一过，知所患 盖“迫害狂”之类。语颇错杂无伦次，又多荒唐之言；亦不著月日，惟墨色字体不一，知非 一时所书。间亦有略具联络者，今撮录一篇，以供医家研究。记中语误，一字不易；惟人名 虽皆村人，不为世间所知，无关大体，然亦悉易去。至于书名，则本人愈后所题，不复改也。七年四月二日识

Answer 1

是翻译成英文还是白话？
某家兄弟，现在不说他们的名字了吧，当年在中学的时候都是我的好朋友。分隔多年，渐渐不怎么知道他们的消息了。前些天偶然听说其中的一个生了大病，正好我回故乡，就绕道去他们家看望，结果只见到了一人。他说生病的是他弟弟，承蒙我这么远辛辛苦苦来探视，不过早已经好了，现在去某地候补官职喽！说起这些他哈哈大笑，拿出两册日记给我看，说从中可以看得出当时患病的情形，不妨就献给老朋友吧！我拿回去看了一遍，知道了他患的大概是“迫害狂”之类的病。语言相当错乱无序，又有很多荒唐的话；也不写几月几号，不过墨色、字体不一致，由此可知不是一次写的。其中偶尔也有略微有些联系的，现在摘录成一篇，以供医学家研究。日记里的错误词句，一个字都不改，只有人名虽然都是乡村里的人，社会大众并不认识，无关大体，但也都改掉了。至于书名，则是患者本人病愈之后写上的，不再改了。民国七年四月二日记。

Answer 2

大概是
某家兄弟，现在不说他们的名字了吧，当年在中学的时候都是我的好朋友。分隔多年，渐渐不怎么知道他们的消息了。前些天偶然听说其中的一个生了大病，正好我回故乡，就绕道去他们家看望，结果只见到了一人。他说生病的是他弟弟，承蒙我这么远辛辛苦苦来探视，不过早已经好了，现在去某地候补官职喽！说起这些他哈哈大笑，拿出两册日记给我看，说从中可以看得出当时患病的情形，不妨就献给老朋友吧！我拿回去看了一遍，知道了他患的大概是“迫害狂”之类的病。语言相当错乱无序，又有很多荒唐的话；也不写几月几号，不过墨色、字体不一致，由此可知不是一次写的。其中偶尔也有略微有些联系的，现在摘录成一篇，以供医学家研究。日记里的错误词句，一个字都不改，只有人名虽然都是乡村里的人，社会大众并不认识，无关大体，但也都改掉了。至于书名，则是患者本人病愈之后写上的，不再改了。
民国七年四月二日记。

Answer 3

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Answer 4

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Answer 5

“阙”在古文里有“消失，缺少”的意思，而狂人日记中，原文是“分隔多年，消息渐阙”，意思是，分开了这么多年，消息越来越少。所以“渐阙”的意思是逐渐减少，逐渐缺失。