写作思路及要点：以my perfect holiday为题，围绕假期的趣事展开描写，接着表达自己的想法以及观点。
正文：
It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like.
这是我们暑假的第二天。我感觉很好。我觉得我是自由的。我有很多时间做我喜欢的事情。
My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don't feel lonely. But I didn't do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily composition. It was my homework.
我的父母在中山。所以我独自生活，但我不感到孤独。但我没有做一些特别的事情。我呆在家里看电视。哦!我写了一篇英语作文。这是我的家庭作业。
Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
今天，我睡了14个小时，我觉得我很累了。是吃晚饭的时间了。我必须去！我很饿。
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today it is really a good day,my mother and i went to park this morning,there were much people in the park.someone palying basket ,someone walking along the river,someone reading english loudly,i am so happy to play in the park.今天过的真不错，我和妈妈早晨去公园了，很多人都在公园里，有打篮球的，有散步的，还有大声朗读英语的，今天在公园玩的真高兴！本回答被网友采纳
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