写作思路：要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中，我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述，尽可能简化人物语言。这样，即使情节连贯，又使语句“简练”。
This winter holiday I stayed at home. I am happy because my father and my mother could spend more time with me during the Spring Festival.
Besides, on the eve of the Spring Festival, we had a great family reunion dinner and then we watched Spring Festival Party on CCTV1. Sometimes, I reviewed my lessons. I had a very wonderful holiday.
整个寒假我都呆在家里，我很高兴因为春节期间我的爸爸和妈妈能够花更多时间和我在一起。而且，在新年前夕，我们一家吃了团圆饭，然后我们看中央电视一台的春节联欢晚会。有时，我复习功课。我度过了一个非常愉快的假期。
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My summer vacation
My summer vacation is very interesting. I have a lot of spare time to do the things I like. I often read novels in the morning. And I often do sports with my friends in the afternoon ,though it is very hot.For example,we often play basketball and football.If it rains , table tennis is a good choice. Sometimes I go shopping with my mother. My summer vacation is so meaningful and interesting.本回答被网友采纳
My summer vacation is very interesting. I have a lot of spare time to do the things I like. I often read novels in the morning. And I often do sports with my friends in the afternoon ,though it is very hot.For example,we often play basketball and football.If it rains , table tennis is a good choice. Sometimes I go shopping with my mother. My summer vacation is so meaningful and interesting.本回答被网友采纳
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