高二英语短文改错

Question

Do you often stay up late? If you don't well,I have to tell you it is not something goood to do it.
A week ago,I stayed up very late,reading a very interested book. The book was so great that I just couldn't
keep my eyes on it. So I read and read and if I finished it,it was already six o'clock the next morning.
I went school at seven o'clock as usually.But I was so tired that I couldn't keep my eyes open. I fall asleep in class,
The teacher criticized me,what's worse,she caught a cold during the sleep taht day. But I suggest you never stay up late

至少有十处错误。。 本人英文无能额

Answer 1

Do you often stay up late? If you don't well,I have to tell you it is not something goood to do it.【don't well去掉，换成do；去掉something】
A week ago,I stayed up very late,reading a very interested【interesting】 book. The book was so great that I just couldn't
keep my eyes on【用keep my eyes away from】 it. So I read and read and if【when】 I finished it,it was already six o'clock the next morning.
I went school at seven o'clock as usually【as usual】.But I was so tired that I couldn't keep my eyes open. I fall asleep in class,
The teacher criticized me,what's worse,she caught a cold during the sleep taht[that] day. But I suggest you never stay up late

Answer 2

Do you often stay up late? If you aren’t well,I have to tell you it is not something good to do .
A week ago,I stayed up very late,reading a very interesting book. The book was so great that I just couldn't
keep my eyes from it. So I read and read and when I finished it,it was already six o'clock the next morning.
I went to school at seven o'clock as usual.But I was so tired that I couldn't keep my eyes open. I fell asleep in class,
The teacher criticized me,what was worse,I caught a cold during the sleep taht day. But I suggest you never stay up too late.

以上是改过的，详细见下面
aren’t改自don't
But I suggest you never stay up too late.
what was改自what's worse
fell 改自fall
went to school加to
usual 改自usually
when 改自if
from 改自 on
interesting 改自 interested
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