小学六年级英语作文

Question

上个星期六你们班去郊游（go hiking)。请你描述当时的情景和你们的心情。字数不少于30个单词

Answer 1

Last saterday ,our class went hiking together.and this is very interesting,I think I will never forget it.
on the way,we are all very happy,some people were talking something,some people were catching some animals,others were singing a song .At noon ,we had lunch together .Exciting and interesting,dark
was coming,we had to go home last.

Answer 2

下面写的很好。是Saturday。我觉得把i think 去掉吧 。a song 改为songs。最后一句改为Dark was coming,we had to go homein a cheerful mood
last. 把Exciting and interesting去掉吧
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