第1个回答 2013-11-18
那么晚还提问哦,不错嘛,是爱学习的孩子咧!不过这个东西要自己写才会熟练,我也是一个学生,希望你可以通过自己的笔尖写出属于自己的文章,英语作文这个东西不是很难掌握一些基本句式句型,再用句型翻译你的想法,一篇简单的英语作文就出炉了! 个人觉得上面那片作文存在多处语法错误!!!而且真的是不太好!!(一楼那个,不好意思,说你的不是了!)我在这按照上面那个中文写一篇吧,希望你是参考,不要抄哦!(可以就采纳我的答案吧!嘻嘻) it`s summer holiday now and i went to xiaoming`s birthday party with some friends on last sunday ! On the morning we bought lots of food ,juice and fruits for him as well as other gifts like birthday cards !the party was interesting that we sang songs and danced during the party ,and we also played some kinds of games which made us happy ! we said goodbye at 9 o`clock with lauthter !we felt happy when we saw xiaoming`s happiness.in a word,it was an unforgettable day ! 记得努力学习哦!!!