用英语写一封电子邮件（考试作文100-150字左右）

Question

内容：
假定你是王芳，昨天你家人在争论买车的事，爸爸想买车而妈妈反对，你赞同爸爸的观点。今天你用英语给在外国读书的同学方琴法一封邮件，客观介绍你爸妈的观点，并征求对方同意，爸：方便度假，买东西 妈：贵，不方便停车。
谢谢~~~征求帮忙·！

Answer 1

Dear wangfang
I would like to tell you something about my family to buy a car.My father syggested that we should buy a car.He thought that drving car was convenient when we gone on a trip and bought something .But my mother opposed to this idea.She claimed that driving cars was not a wise idea.For example,it was hard to find any places to park when we went to the supermarket.And she thought cars also was too expensive for us.In my opinion,i agree with my father.And what do you think?Thank you ank look forward to having your opinion on this thing .
yours wangfang

Answer 2

如何写英文电子邮件 一、文法上　　1、切忌主客不分或模糊 　　例子: Deciding to rescind the earlier estimate, our report was updated to include $40,000 for new equipment.” 　　应改为：Deciding to rescind our earlier estimate, we have updated our report to include $40,000 for new equipment. (We决定呀, 不是report.) 　　2、句子不要凌碎 　　例子: He decided not to audit the last ten contracts. Because of our previous objections about compliance. 应该连在一起. 　　3、结构对称,令人容易理解. 　　例子: The owner questioned the occupant’s lease intentions and the fact that the contract had been altered with ink markings. 　　应改为: The owner questioned the occupant’s lease intentions and ink alterations of the contract. 　　4.单众数不要搞乱,不然会好刺眼,看不舒服. 　　例如: An authorized person must show that they have security clearance. 　　5.动词主词要呼应. 想想这两个分别: 　　1）.This is one of the public-relations functions that is underbudgeted. 　　2）. This is one of the public-relations functions, which are underbudgeted. 　　6.时态和语气不要转变太多.看商务英语已经是苦事,不要浪费人家的精力啊. 　　7.标点要准确. 　　例如: He did not make repairs, however, he continued to monitor the equipment. 　　改为: He did not make repairs; however, he continued to monitor the equipment. 　　8.选词正确. 好像affect和effect, operative和operational等等就要弄清楚才好用啦. 　　9.拼字正确. 有电脑拼字检查功能后,就更加不能偷懒. 　　10.大小写要注意.非必要不要整个字都是大写,除非要骂人 　　例如: MUST change to OS immediately. 外国人就觉得不礼貌和喝令人一样. 要强调的话,用底线,斜字,粗体就可以了.

Answer 3

多少字？

Hi Qin Fang,
How are you?
I am doing good. Yesterday my family had a discussion of car purchasing. My dad was agreed to purchase a car, but my mom was disagreed with that. My dad thought that it would be convenient for us to go vocation if we had a car, but my mom thought that it would be inconvenient to park.
What is your opinion？ I am agreed with my dad, I think that he is right. So please let me know your opinion, and email me asap!
Thanks a lot!

Best,

Fang Wang