本人近期要参加一项外资企业工厂的面试，要用英语自我介绍一下，所以在此麻烦各位帮帮忙帮我翻译一下……

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本人近期要参加一项外资企业工厂的面试，要用英语自我介绍一下，所以在此麻烦各位帮帮忙帮我翻译一下……谢谢！
内容如下:
我叫~，来自西北甘肃，今年23岁，我是技校毕业，曾在校被评为优秀党员，我喜欢交友，看书，在毕业以后做过销售，卖衣服，我喜欢挑战，也有上进心，很希望能与贵公司合作，我会以我所学好好努力！谢谢！
所有不足之处，请帮忙修改一下吧！多谢了！

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My name is ..., from the northwest Gansu Province, 23 years old, I was technical school graduate, has been named an outstanding member in the school, I like making friends, reading, after graduation worked in sales, selling clothes, I like the challenge, there are self-motivated, it hopes to cooperate with your company, I will work hard, I've learned! Thank you!追问

没有可以修改的地方吗？

参谋一下

追答

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