作文如何写好人物描写?

如题所述

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抓住人物特点,开头结尾点明写进作文里的人物,一定要首先想好特点,人物的特点可以从他的年龄、生活背景、外貌、语言、动作、兴趣爱好、性格等方面去寻找。另外,人是有多面性的,在写一篇作文时,要根据主题(中心思想)去选择主要特点来写,切忌面面俱到。 写进作文里的人物特点,要以积极、正面、正能量的特点为主,如坚韧不拔,勤奋好学,兴趣广泛,热爱劳动,勤俭节约等,负能量的特点尽量不要写进作文里,如果一定要写,也要体现出批判的看法。写作时,要在开头直接点出文中所写人物的特点,开门见山,简明扼要,点题后直接进入主要内容的描写。结尾要进行呼应,两次点明人物特点,引起读者深思。
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选好典型事例,围绕主题进行无论是写人作文,还是记事作文,只要涉及到描写人物,就一定会有对事例的选择和描写。
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第1个回答  2023-05-29

写作思路:确立中心,围绕选材,确定重点,安排详略,选材时要注意紧紧围绕文章的中心思想,选择真实可信、新鲜有趣的材料,以使文章中心思想鲜明、深刻地表现出来,具体如下:



Some people's idols are celebrities, scientists, a-listers. And my idol is a very ordinary boy - Wang Junkai. Why is he my idol? He is very good. Since his debut, he has gained a lot of popularity. His activities and work seem to never stop. Every day, he is either working or on the way to work.

This caused him to delay a lot of his lessons. He only had two months to review the knowledge he had learned in three years of high school, but even so, he was admitted to the Acting Department of Beijing Film Academy and entered his ideal major. 

He is excellent, excellent to admire, to like. He is not proud. He continued to go to school even as he became famous.

In order not to let his fans disturb his classmates, he went to school before dawn every day. He never pretended to be a star in class. He would clean up and be very careful not to disturb his classmates, so that his teachers praised him repeatedly when they were interviewed.

At the Beijing Film Academy, he was also very low-key, hoping to be an ordinary college student, to learn knowledge and learn a skill. He is dedicated to his work. He worked hard to sing, dance, perform and participate in variety shows. When the work is very tired, he never complains, just silently insist.

As a team leader, he always takes the lead in every group activity, giving the other team a leading role. He is a gentleman. 

He always takes care of female guests when attending variety shows. When taking photos with female guests, he always holds his hands so that he does not touch the female guests' bodies.

They carry the women's dresses. They hold them. This is Wang Junkai, he is worth everyone like, but also worthy of becoming our model!

译文:有的人的偶像是名人,是科学家,是一线明星。而我的偶像是一个很普通的大男孩——王俊凯。他为什么是我的偶像呢?他很优秀。他从出道开始就收获了许许多多的人气,他的活动,工作仿佛永远没有停息,每天不是在工作,就是在去工作的路上。

这导致他耽搁了许多的课程。时间紧迫,他只能用两个月的时间复习高中中学三年的知识,但是即便这样,他仍是考取了北京电影学院表演系,走进了他理想的专业。他优秀,优秀的令人羡慕,令人喜欢。他不骄傲。在他出名的时候,他仍是坚持上学。

为了不让自己的粉丝打搅到班级的同学,他每天天不亮就去上学,在班级里他也从来不以明星的身份自居,他会打扫卫生,他会很小心,尽量的不打搅同学,以致于他的教师在接受采访时,也对他连连赞扬。

在北京电影学院上学时,他也很低调,希望自己做一个普通的大学生,好好的学习知识,学成一门本领。他很敬业。出道起来,他兢兢业业,他努力的唱歌,跳舞,表演,参加综艺。在工作很累的时候,他从不埋怨,只是默默的坚持。

每次组合一起活动的使候,作为队长的他总会打头阵,给对员起到带头的作用。他很绅士。参加综艺的时候他总是会照顾女嘉宾,和女嘉宾合影的时候,他总是会摆正自己的手,不让他触碰到女嘉宾的身体。

会帮女嘉宾提裙子,会扶着他们。就是这样的王俊凯,他值得所有人喜欢,也值得成为我们学习的楷模!