毕业论文的摘要要用英文写，高手给翻译下

Question

摘要如下：

随着互联网的发展，衍生出了网上银行这种新兴的金融服务业务，相比普通的银行，网上银行的操作更加简单和快捷。本文从招商银行的现状进行入手，对招商银行网上银行存在的问题进行分析，并且提出一些建议。
论文一共分为以下几个部分：
第一：对招行网银的发展历史进行简单的阐述
第二：分析招行网银的发展现状
第三：分析了招行网银存在的一些问题
第四：对招行网银未来发展的几点建议

请不要用在线翻译，翻的乱七八糟的，英文好的达达帮忙翻译下

Answer 1

完全人工翻译

Accompanying with the development of the Internet, there derived a new emerged financial services business of Internet banking which is more simple and speedy than the ordinary banks. In this paper, I will proceed with the present status of China Merchants Bank and have some analysis against the problems correlative with their online bank and give forth some suggestions.
this thesis is divided into the following sections:
I: A summary on the development history of the Internet bank of China Merchants Bank.
II: An analysis for the development status quo of the Internet bank of China Merchants Bank.
III: An analysis for some problems of the Internet bank of China Merchants Bank.
IV: Some suggestions for the future development of the Internet bank of China Merchants Bank.

简释：第一、第二、第三、第四 按照西方人习惯用罗马数字。
网银用Internet bank当然用online bank或net bank 都无不可。第一个internet banking 是指整个网银行业。

Answer 2

Along with Internet's development, grew on-line bank this kind of emerging financial service, compared the ordinary bank, on-line bank's operation was simpler and quickly. This article carries on from businessmen are invited to open companies bank's present situation obtains, carries on the analysis to businessmen are invited to open companies bank on-line bank existence's question, and puts forward some proposals. The paper altogether divides into following several parts: First: To incurs the good net silver the historical development to carry on the simple elaboration second: The analysis incurs the good net silver the development present situation third: Has analyzed move of good net silver existence some questions fourth: To incurs several suggestions which the good net silver will develop in the future

Answer 3

Ebanking,a new kind of financial service,emerges along with the development of Internet. Compared with the ordinary banks,the operation of ebanking is simpler and faster. Based on the case study of China Merchants Bank,this thesis analyzes the problems of ebanking and provides respective suggestions.
In general,the thesis can be devided into the following four parts: firstly,the brief introduction of the history of CMB;
secondly,the analysis of the status quo of the CMB's ebanking;
thirdly, the analysis of the existing problems of the CMB's ebanking service;
lastly, the suggestions for the future development of the CMB's ebanking.

写到论文里的时候 这几个部分不要分列 直接写成一段就好 现在这样便于你对比
我毕业了 当初被论文折磨的不行还好有个好结果 我们导师好严格~ 加油！呵呵