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Question

我的名字叫**。今年23岁，毕业于**大学，我的专业是公共事业管理。毕业后一直从事销售方面的工作，不过我对酒店行业非常感兴趣，而且也系统的学习过酒店管理。只是一直没有机会走进这个行业中去，所以我很珍惜现在这个面试的机会，如果我能加入这个行业中来，我一直会加倍的努力，不会让你失望。谢谢！

Answer 1

有则改之，无则加免。“该出书了”觉得sales前面的the不应该加，我表示接受，其余两点，完全可以提出你的译法。

我的名字叫**。今年23岁，毕业于**大学，我的专业是公共事业管理。毕业后一直从事销售方面的工作，不过我对酒店行业非常感兴趣，而且也系统的学习过酒店管理。只是一直没有机会走进这个行业中去，所以我很珍惜现在这个面试的机会，如果我能加入这个行业中来，我一直会加倍的努力，不会让你失望。谢谢！
My name is ***, 23 years old, and graduated from ** University. My major in university study is Public Affairs
Management. I have been engaged in sales work since my graduation, but I am very interested in hotel industry, and in fact I systematically studied the courses about hotel management. It is a pity that I have not got the opportunity to enter the field of hotel industry, therefore I cherish very much this interview. If I have the honor to join hotel industry I will always redouble my efforts, and will not let you down. Thank you!

Answer 2

My name is **. i'm 23 years old and graguated from ** university and major in Public management.I have been engaged in sales work since graduation, and also very interested in the hotel industry as learned it systematically before, but just have no opportunity to work in.
therefore, i'm very cherish this interview and I will do my utmost and you won't be disappointed. Thank you!

Answer 3

My name is ** and I am 23 year of age. I graduated from ** university with the major of public administration.Since graduation, I have been working in the field of business, especially in the work of marking, but I show more interest in hotel industry and have learned hotel management systematically by myself.however, I have never gained any access to this field, so I really cherish the precious opportunity lying ahead me.if I have the previlege of working in this circle, I will be able to, I believe, do my best to satisfy you.Thank you.

Answer 4

楼的上翻译就这个垃圾水平还放心采用。。。

不说别的 你觉得你副词的位置放对了吗？

Answer 5

My name is**.This year is 23 years old and graduate from**university, my profession is public enterprise management.Have been being engaged in the work of selling the aspect after graduating, however I am very interested in cabaret profession, and also the studying of system is over the cabaret management.Just have been having no opportunity to walk into to go in this profession, so I cherish very much now the opportunity of this personal interview, if I can join this profession, I always double effort, can't make you disappoint.Thank!

Answer 6

用户名“qindajia” 翻译的是有问题啊。绝对不能放心使用。
问题：
1.My major in university study is Public Affairs Management。（fragment）
2.I have been engaged in the sales work since my graduation. 不能用‘the’sales work,不是特指的工作不用the.
3.It is a pity that I have not got the opportunity to enter the field of hotel industry。不能是have not got, haven't gotten. 根据原文的意思，你这么翻的话一点都不好。
4. I will not let u down.
就算其他内容没有语法错误，我个人觉得不妥。
建议用Hor208,或者henry