初三学生的英文读后感，请英语老师们指正

Question

I fell <<Harry Potter>> is beautiful I like it very much It is different from other movies It is more beautiful than
others harry and his ciassmeats strive together in order to save their school They use their magic to save the magic
world Ifell theyare very fantasic They are the world hero They don't make me letdown Facing their foe they don't
fell afraid Sometimes Iwant to become agood magician But I know Ican't So the <<Harry Potter>> becomes a box of my
dream.

Answer 1

I (feel) <<Harry Potter>> is beautiful I like it very much It is different from other movies It is more beautiful than
others (Harry) and his ciassmeats (strived) together in order to save their school They (used) their magic to save the (magical)
world I (feel) they are very fantasic They are the world (heroes) They don't make me (disappointed失望) Facing their （foes) they (didn't)
(feel) afraid Sometimes Iwant to become a good magician But I know Ican't So the <<Harry Potter>> becomes a (book) of my
dream.

我觉得电影中的情节应该用一般过去时，因为是故事情节，已经成为过去。但是文中有几处没有用过去时，是因为有的是客观存在的事实，比如“They are the world heroes.”
还有一点我一定要纠正你，就是写作文的时候标点一定要清晰，否则会造成读者对你的文章产生歧义，或者不理解，甚至把两个词语混到一起作为一个词来看待。

若指点不周请谅解，祝你学习进步，加油~~

Answer 2

我不是英语老师~但是我觉得这几点建议还是可以帮助你的。
首先，英语中没有书名号，一般就用单引号代替，一定要改；
I Fell-think,这个单词要理性一点
they use their magic-在magic后面加power,因为magic是形容词；
Fantastic一般不用来形容人，一般是说物的~
They are the heros of the world或者说they are the world's hero
they didn't make me down;
but 和so 是不能连用的，有But就不用so

Answer 3

Heros

Let sb Down. 固定用法. 这个你查字典查得吧. 断章取义了.

I feel, I like, I want . 句型单一. 需要变化. 词要多样点.

Answer 4

很不错 意见嘛 我不是易建联 你找易建联问去吧