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尊敬的加拿大主中国大使馆大使：
您好！
我是2007年11月1日在贵处进行的面谈，并于当日下午到SOS北京国际体检中心做体检，SOS告知我体检报告已于11月2日送到加拿大驻中国大使馆。
我的姓名：xx 籍贯：xxxx
出生日期：19 年 月 日
电话：05xx-139xxxxxxxx
非常抱歉的是我忘记档案号码。
请尽快告知我的档案号码和签证进展，非常感谢！

Answer 1

尊敬的加拿大主中国大使馆大使：
Dear Ambassador
您好！
Hello,
我是2007年11月1日在贵处进行的面谈，并于当日下午到SOS北
I had interview in your Embassy on the 1st of November, 2007, in that afternoon, I had physical check- up in SOS Beijing International Physical Centre,
京国际体检中心做体检，SOS告知我体检报告已于11月2日送到
I was informed by SOS that my physical report was deliveried to Canadian Embassy in China.
加拿大驻中国大使馆。
我的姓名：xx 籍贯：xxxx
My name: XX Hometown:XXX
出生日期：19 年 月 日
Date of Birth: Day---Month---Year
电话：05xx-139xxxxxxxx
Telephone:
非常抱歉的是我忘记档案号码。
请尽快告知我的档案号码和签证进展，非常感谢！
I am very sorry that I forgot my file No. Could you please advise my file No. and the status of Visa application.

Answer 2

Respected Canadian ambassador to the Chinese embassy:
Hello!
I was on November 1, 2007 in your Department to conduct interviews, and in the afternoon to the Beijing International SOS medical centers do physical examination, I was informed by SOS medical report was on November 2 sent to the Canadian embassy in China.
My Name: xx Birthplace: xxxx
Date of birth: 19 years on
Tel: 05 xx-139xxxxxxxx
I am very sorry that I forgot file number.
Please inform me as soon as the file number and visa progress, very grateful!