帮我修改一下这篇英语自我介绍中错误的 谢谢

Question

Hi,everyone,glad to meet all of you!Here stand in front you is an outgoing girl.Want to know more about me?
My name is Zhang Yuchen.I’m 12 years old.I am in No.8 middle school and I am in Class 6 Grade 1. Let me talk about my "favorites".I have many class :Chinese,math,English,science music……. I like English best.My English teacher is Miss Chen, She is very nice to us. I like her a lot. I like sports,and I think ping-pong is my favorite.Because it’s relaxing. My favorite food is hamburger . I think it’s so yummy . In all movies,I like comedies best, it’s so so so funny .
There are three people in my family,of course they are my father,mother ,and me.I love them.
That's all,thanks.Do you think you'll remember me now?
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这是我（初一）的一篇英语自我介绍。我们口试要用的 请大家帮忙修改其中错误的语法和用词 ，谢谢 。 最好能说明一下，感激...

Answer 1

Hi,everyone,glad to meet all of you!Here stand in front of you is an outgoing girl.Want to know more about me?
My name is Zhang Yuchen.I’m 12 years old.I am in No.8 middle school and I am in Class 6 Grade 1. Let me talk about my "favorites".I have many classes :Chinese,math,English,science music……. I like English best.My English teacher is Miss Chen, She is very nice to us. I like her a lot. I like sports,and I think ping-pong is my favorite.Because it’s relaxing. My favorite food is hamburger . I think it’s so yummy . In all movies,I like comedies best, it’s so so so funny .
There are three people in my family,of course they are my father,mother ,and I.I love them.
That's all,thanks.Do you think you'll remember me now?

Answer 2

Hi,everyone,glad to meet all of you!Here stand in front you is an outgoing girl.Want to know more about me?
My name is Zhang Yuchen,I’m 12 years old.I am in No.8 middle school and I am in Class 6 Grade 1. Let me talk about my "favorites".I've got many classes for e.g:Chinese,math,English,science music……. I like English best.My English teacher is Miss Chen, She is very nice to us. I like her a lot. I like sports,and I think ping-pong is my favorite.Because it’s relaxing. My favorite food is hamburger, because it’s so tasty . In all movies,I like comedies best, it’s so so so funny .
There are three people in my family,of course they are my father,mother ,and me.I love them.
That's all,thanks.Do you think you'll remember me now?