求2008高考天津卷英语作文范文(满分作文)一篇

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满分文(一)

How to Protect Our Eyesight

As we can see in the picture, nowadays most students wear glasses because they are short sighted due to high study pressure. With the help of glasses, they can see the blackboard clearly.

This phenomenon must be paid attention to. We should reduce the time of reading and when we read, do read in the bright place so as to protect our eyes. Besides, the eye exercises are another way to keep eyes healthy. After school, we’d better get more sleep so that the eyes can get more rest.

As the saying goes, eyes are the window of our hearts. If you can follow the methods mentioned above, you can surely have a good eye sight.

名校点评：

本文采用三段论的方式，分析图画，提出建议，提出希望，叙述比较详细。文中用了两个伴随状语，使得文章非常连贯。这个独立结构也很好。此外，作者还是用了比较复杂的句子，We should reduce the...采用复合结构，讲出了多个保护视力的要点。

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好词1. phenomenon n.现象2. so as to 以便

好句1. With the help of glasses, they can see the blackboard clearly.

在眼镜的辅助之下，他们才能将黑板看得更清楚。

好处：with引导状语表示伴随。

2. As the saying goes, eyes are the window of our hearts.

众所周知的是，眼睛是心灵的窗户。

好处：谚语的使用增光添彩。

满分文(二)

How to Protect Our Eyesight

Look at the picture and you will find the worrying phenomenon: most students now wear glasses. Because of unhealthy ways of using eyes and high study pressure, students get short sighted easily.

However, we can do something to protect our eyes from getting short sighted. When reading, make sure you are in the bright place and let your eyes rest every hour. If your eyes are aching,doing some eye exercises can relieve your eye tiredness. It will be good to your eyes to take enough sleep. I believe you can protect your eyes if you follow the tips.

Hope every one of you have a clear world!

名师点评：

本文审题准确，要点完整而齐全。从结构来说，首先提出问题，其次讨论如何及为什么需要解决问题。文章长短句结合使用，句式变换而流畅。文章用词地道而成熟，可以称得上是一篇不错的考场佳作。

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好词1. ache v. 疼痛2. pressure n. 压力3. relieve v.缓解

好句1. However, we can do something to protect our eyes from getting short sighted.

然而我们可以采取一些措施来保护我们的眼睛免于近视。

好处：do something to，采取措施。

2. If your eyes are aching, doing some eye exercise can relieve your eye tiredness.

如果你的眼睛感到疼痛，做眼操可以缓解你的视力疲劳。

好处：动名词作主语引导从句。

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