第1个回答 2008-09-16
申请书如下:
筑波大学的松田教授您好：
很突然的给您写信真的很不好意思，我叫胡忠利，是一个出生在中国安徽的22岁女孩，2004年进入安徽医科大学医学检验专业本科学习，将于2009年6月毕业。想申请您的2009年10月老年的研究生，随后进入修士学习的课程。
求学动机
我想参与您的课题研究的起初动机是因为我的爷爷，从小我是和爷爷一起长大的，爷爷送我去幼儿园，带我出去玩，爷爷爽朗的笑声是我小时候的全部记忆，可是就在2005年我大学二年级的时候爷爷患上了老年痴呆症，从此以后他不再记得家人，不再有欢笑，那个时候起我就迫切的想找到方法去治疗我的爷爷。爷爷患病已经有4个年头了，我相信中国还有许多象爷爷一样的老人因为老年痴呆而不再能有与家人共享的时光。中国的老年化日趋严重并且据调查，60～69岁为1%～2%；70～79岁为4%～8%，80岁以上为15%～20%。据此推测我国约有老年痴呆患者500万之多。除了老年痴呆外还有老年病的预防保健等方面问题。可是我国的老年保健相关工作却未开展开。日本是世界上长寿人口最多的国家，对于老年保健等方面具有非常深厚的研究，因此我想去日本学习这些知识去帮助那些需要帮助的老年人。筑波大学是我一直以来就喜欢的大学，它注重研究生教育，培养学生的独立研究能力，这都是别的大学很难做到的。老年性痴呆多数须依靠家庭护理、康复，因此我想跟随您学习这方面的有关知识。
专业背景
我们的大学注重学生的基础教育，因此在大学期间一共开设了48门相关学科的学习，其中内科，外科，生理，病理，呼吸等医学基础课，还学习了与实验相关的统计学，实验设计等学科，相信会对以后的研究学习有一定的帮助。曾在大学期间获得过奖学金，通过了英语六级，学习通过了日语三级，并且现在在准备08年的日语一级考试以及托福考试。
资金来源
我的父亲是医学院的员工，并且有自己的工厂，妈妈是医院里的护士，他们的收入都很稳定，并且对我留学的事情很支持。正在积极筹备，帮助我可以明年顺利去日本学习。
未来研究计划和目标
研究计划
研究目的
人口老龄化是全球性趋势，我国老龄化进程正不断加快。老年健康问题越来越引起政府和卫生决策机构的关注，要以三级预防为导向，有计划系统性地进行病人、高危人群与健康人群管理，尽可能减少并发症和病情恶化。降低死亡率是提高老年人生存质量的头等大事。合理膳食，多食新鲜蔬菜水果，增加膳食纤维摄入量，控制体重，戒烟、限酒，应避精神紧张，注意心理精神卫生，克服不活动不良心理。
研究内容
一，生活环境对老人心理及健康的影响，根据现有的老人的生活状态大致可分为单独居住在养老院，和老伴一起住在养老院居住，独居，和老伴一起居住，单独和子女居住，与老伴一同和子女居住等六种状态。由于环境中医疗设施的水平和老人的心理状态影响老人生活质量，例如医疗、护理、日常生活照料及卫生水平较高的养老机构，能够做好各种常见病、多发病的健康教育及医疗护理，早发现、早诊治，防止疾病发展，并且满足老年人精神慰籍和心理疏导的需求。
二，锻炼，学习对于痴呆症的预防。1，提高老年人生活质量，康复训练至关重要。有利于防止废用性肌萎缩等废用综合征的产生，使肌肉及肌腱的废用性挛缩不易产生，有效地防止肢体挛缩及非麻痹侧的肌萎缩。同时，在一定程度上解除的不安，有效预防了老年抑郁及老年痴呆症的发生。2，学习对于老年痴呆的康复作用。
三，健康教育对于老年人QOL的提高的作用，根据老年人的生理，心理和病理特点，提供有效的健康教育，提高老年患者的生活质量，培养老年患者自我护理能力，预防并发症，减轻患者家属和社会的负担。从饮食指导、用药指导、生活方式指导、家庭护理、心理指导、安全行为指导。
为了完成以上所设想的研究计划，我将会努力学习老年关怀等相关学科，并努力提高自己的语言水平，争取做到和老人们沟通无障碍，更好的完成研究计划
毕业后的打算，毕业后我想继续学习博士课程，或者回国作出自己的贡献，根据情况决定。
最后
老师，我感谢您耐心的看完了这封信，我知道我不是什么名牌大学的毕业生，我们的学校只是一个省属重点大学，并且我的日语水平也不高，但为了表示我的诚意，我用日语写了这封信。只是想让您看到我在努力，虽然做的还很不够，但是希望做到最好。
再次感谢您。
第2个回答 2008-09-20
The requisition is as follows: Tsukuba University's pine Professor Tian hello: Very sudden writes to you takes seriously is very embarrassed, my name am Hu Zhongli, is a birth in a Chinese Anhui's 22 year-old girl, in 2004 entered the Anhui Medical college medicine examination specialized undergraduate course to study, will graduate from 2009 June. Wants to apply for your in October, 2009 old age graduate student, afterward enters the curriculum which the member studies. Studies the motive I want to participate in your topic research initial motive am because of mine grandfather, I am since childhood and grandfather grow up together, grandfather delivers me to go to the kindergarten, leads me to exit to play, grandfather the frank laughter was my childhood's complete memory, but I university second grade's time grandfather has suffered from the senile dementia sickness in 2005, he no longer remembered the family member from now, no longer had laughs heartily, at that time had me on urgently to want to find the method to treat me grandfather. Grandfather was sick already had 4 years, I believed that China also had many looks like grandfather same old person because of the senile dementia, but no longer could have the time which shared with the family member. China's astogeny day by day serious, and according to the investigation, 60~69 years old is 1%~2%; 70~79 years old are above 4%~8%,80 years old are 15%~20%. According to the above extrapolated our country approximately has senile dementia patient 5,000,000 many. Also has diseases of the aged aspect questions and so on prevention health care besides the senile dementia. But our country's geriatric care related work is actually undeveloped. Japan is in the world longevity population most countries, regarding aspects and so on geriatric care has the very deep research, therefore I want to go to Japan to study the senior citizen who these knowledge help these to need to help. Since the Tsukuba University is the university which I have liked, it pays great attention the postgraduate education, raises student's independent research ability, this is other university is very difficult to achieve. The senile dementia most must depend upon the home nursing, the recovery, therefore I want to follow you to study this aspect the related knowledge. Specialized background Our university pays great attention student's elementary education, therefore in university period altogether has opened 48 related discipline studies, internal medicine department, surgical department, physiology, pathology, medicine basic courses and so on breath, but also has studied with the experiment related statistics, disciplines and so on experimental design, believed that can have certain help to the later research study. Once in university period has obtained the scholarship, passed the English six levels, the study adopted Japanese third-level, and the present is preparing 08 year Japanese first-level test as well as the TOEFL. Sources of fund My father is medical school's staff, and has own factory, mother is in hospital nurse, their income is very stable, and studies abroad to me the matter supports very much. Will be arranging, to help me positively to be possible next year to go to Japan to study smoothly. Futurology plan and goal Research project The research goal aging of populations is the global tendency, our country aging advancement is speeding up unceasingly. The old age healthy question causes the government and the health policy-making organ attention more and more, must take the third-level prevention as the guidance, has the plan systematically to carry on the patient, the high-risk group and the healthy crowd manages, reduces the complication and the aggravation of disease as far as possible. Cuts the mortality rate is enhances the senior citizen to survive the quality major event. The reasonable meals, the multi-food green goods fruit, increases the meals textile fiber amount of radiation, the control body weight, the no-smoking, limits the liquor, should evade the mental strain, the attention psychology mental hygiene, overcomes does not move the bad psychology. The research content one, the living conditions to old person psychological and the health influence, may divide into approximately according to the existing old person's life condition live alone in the old folks home, lives together with the spouse in the old folks home lives, lives alone, lives together with the spouse, lives alone with the children, with spouse together with children housing and so on six conditions. Because in the environment medical treatment facility's level and old person's psychology affects old person the quality of life, for example medical, nursing, the daily life care and the hygienic level high retirement organization, can complete each kind of common disease, frequently-occurring disease's health education and the medical care, discovered early, diagnoses early, prevents disease to develop, and satisfies the senior citizen spirit to console the nationality and the psychological unblocking demand. Second, the exercise, studies regarding the dementia sickness prevention. 1st, improves the senior citizen quality of life, the recovery trains very important. Is advantageous in preventing to abandon and so on abandons with the amyotrophy with the syndrome production, causes the muscle and tendon abandoning luan shrinks with the nature is not easy to produce, prevents the body luan to shrink and the non-paralysis side amyotrophy effectively. At the same time, relieves to a certain extent the restlessness, prevented the old age to be despondent effectively and senile dementia sickness occurrence. 2nd, studies regarding the senile dementia recovery function. Third, the health education regarding the senior citizen QOL enhancement's function, according to senior citizen's physiology, the psychology and the pathology characteristic, provides the effective health education, improves the old age patient's quality of life, raises the old age patient self-nursing ability, the prevention complication, reduces the patient family member and society's burden. From diet instruction, medication instruction, life style instruction, home nursing, psychological instruction, security behavior instruction. Above in order to complete the research project which conceives, I will study the old age concern diligently and so on related discipline, and will raise own language proficiency diligently, will strive for to achieve with old people communicates does not have the barrier, better will complete the research project After graduation plan, after the graduation, I want to continue to study doctor the curriculum, or returning to homeland makes own contribution, according to situation decision. Finally Teacher, I thanks your patience to look this letter, I had known I am not Good university's graduate, our school is only a province is the Top university, and my Japanese proficiency is not high, but to express that my sincerity, I used Japanese to write this letter. Is only wants to let you see me in diligently, although does is also very insufficient, but the hope achieves well. Thanks you once more.
第3个回答 2008-09-19
我的翻译如下：
Applications are as follows:
Matsuda, a professor at the University of Tsukuba, hello:
Am writing to you in all of a sudden am sorry, My name is Wu Chung-li, a Chinese born in the 22-year-old girl in Anhui, Anhui Medical University in 2004 into the medical undergraduate study and professional test will be graduating in June 2009. You want to apply for the October 2009 graduate of old age, followed by Brother into the learning curriculum.
Motivation to study
I would like you to participate in the research of the motives at first because my grandfather, from a young age and I grew up with Grandpa, Grandpa sent me to kindergarten, take me out to play, the grandfather of hearty laughter is all I remember as a child, but At my university in 2005 when second-year grandfather suffering from Alzheimer's disease, then he is no longer remember family members, no more laughter, since that time I would like to find a way of pressing for the treatment of my grandfather. Grandpa had been sick 4 years, I believe there are many Chinese like the same old grandfather as Alzheimer's and no longer have to share time with their families. China's growing and aging, according to surveys, 60 to 69-year-old of 1% to 2%; 70 to 79-year-old 4% to 8%, 80-year-old more than 15% to 20%. Accordingly speculation about my Alzheimer's patients with as many as 5,000,000. In addition to Alzheimer's disease in old age but also the prevention of health problems, and so on. But China's elderly care not to carry out work related to open. Japanese longevity is the world's most populous country in areas such as health care for the elderly has a very profound study, so I want to go to Japan to learn this knowledge to help those who need help the elderly. Tsukuba University has always been my favorite on the university, which focus on post-graduate education, student independent research capabilities, which are very difficult to do other universities. Alzheimer's disease had to rely on the majority of home care, rehabilitation, so I would like to follow you to learn this knowledge.
Professional background
Our university students focus on basic education at the university during the opening of a total of 48 subjects related to the study, internal medicine, surgery, physiology, pathology, respiratory medicine, and so on the basis of class, but also learn from the experiment and related statistics, experimental design Disciplines, will study after study has some help. In college scholarships won by the six English, learning Japanese through a three-level, and is now in preparation for the Japanese in 2008, as well as a TOEFL exam.
Sources of funding
My father was a medical school staff, and has its own factory, his mother is a hospital nurse, and their income is very stable, and I very much support the study of things. Is now making preparations to help smooth next year I can go to Japan to study.
Future research plans and goals
Research projects
Research purposes
The aging of the population is a global trend, China's aging process is accelerating. Old health problems caused by increasing government and health decision-making bodies, it is necessary to tertiary prevention-oriented, there are plans to systematically carry out the patient, high-risk population groups and health management, to minimize complications and their problems. Reduce the mortality of the elderly is to improve the quality of life a top priority. Reasonable diet, eat more fresh fruits and vegetables, an increase dietary fiber intake, weight control, smoking cessation, alcohol limit should avoid stress, psychological attention to mental health, to overcome the adverse psychological inactive.
Research
First, the living environment for the elderly and mental health effects, according to the current state of life of the elderly can be divided into separate living in the nursing home, and his wife live in nursing homes to live together, living alone, and his wife live alone and children living with Along with his wife and children live in six states, and so on. As the environment of the medical facilities for the elderly and the level of psychological impact on the quality of life for the elderly, such as medical, nursing, the daily life of a higher level of health care and pension institutions, to do a good job in a variety of diseases, multiple health education and health care Care, early detection, early diagnosis and treatment to prevent the development of the disease and the elderly to meet the spiritual and psychological comfort.
Second, training, study for the prevention of dementia. 1, to improve the quality of life of the elderly, rehabilitation is essential. Will help to prevent disuse atrophy, and other waste generated by the syndrome, so that muscle and tendon contracture of disuse have not effectively prevent contracture and non-physical side of the paralysis of the muscular atrophy. At the same time, to a certain extent, the lifting of the disturbed and effective prevention of depression in elderly and the incidence of Alzheimer's disease. 2, to learn about the role of Alzheimer's patients.
Third, health education for the elderly to improve QOL of the role of older persons in accordance with the physical, psychological and pathological features, to provide effective health education and improve the quality of life of elderly patients, training in elderly patients with self-care ability to prevent complications and reduce patients Families and social burden. Guidance from the diet, medication guide, guiding way of life, family care, psychological guidance, safety violations guidance.
In order to complete more than envisaged by the research project, I will study hard in elderly care and other related disciplines, and strive to raise the level of their own language, and old people do for barrier-free communication, the better to complete the research project
After graduating from the plans after graduation I would like to continue to study doctoral courses, or make its own contribution to return, according to the decision of the case.
Final
Teacher, I appreciate your patience in reading the letter, I know what I am not a graduate of the prestigious universities, our school is a provincial key university, and my Japanese is not high level, but in order to express my sincere I wrote a letter in Japanese. I just want to see you working hard, though not enough to do, but I hope to do our best.
Thank you once again.
希望你满意！
第4个回答 2008-09-21
Tsukuba University's pine Professor Tian hello:
Very sudden writes to you takes seriously is very embarrassed, my name am Hu Zhongli, is a birth in a Chinese Anhui's 22 year old girl, in 2004 entered the Anhui Medical college medicine examination specialised undergraduate course to study, will graduate in 2009 June. Wants to apply for your in October, 2009 the old age graduate student, afterward enters the curriculum which the member studies.
Studies the motive
I want to participate in your topic research initial motive am because of mine grandfather, I am since childhood and grandfather grow up together, grandfather delivers me to go to the kindergarten, leads me to exit to play, grandfather the frank laughter was I in childhood the complete memory, but I university second grade's time grandfather has suffered from the senile dementia sickness in 2005, he no longer remembered the family member from now, no longer had laughs heartily, at that time had me on urgently to want to find the method to treat me grandfather. Grandfather was sick already had 4 years, I believed that China also had many looks like grandfather same old person because of the senile dementia, but no longer could have the time which shared with the family member. China's astogeny day by day serious, and according to the investigation, 60~69 years old is 1%~2%; 70~79 years old are above 4%~8%,80 years old are 15%~20%. According to the above extrapolated that our country has senile dementia patient 5,000,000 many approximately. Also has diseases of the aged aspect questions and so on prevention health care besides the senile dementia. But our country's geriatric care related work is actually undeveloped. Japan is in the world longevity population most countries, regarding aspects and so on geriatric care has the very deep research, therefore I want to go to Japan to study the senior citizen who these knowledge help these to need to help. Since the Tsukuba University is the university which I have liked, it pays great attention the postgraduate education, raises student's independent research ability, this is other university is very difficult to achieve. The senile dementia most must depend upon the home nursing, the recovery, therefore I want to follow you to study this aspect the related knowledge.
Specialised background
Our university pays great attention student's elementary education, therefore in university period altogether has opened 48 related discipline studies, internal medicine department, surgical department, physiology, pathology, medicine basic courses and so on breath, but also has studied with the experiment related statistics, disciplines and so on experimental design, believed that can have certain help to the later research study. Once in university period has obtained the scholarship, passed the English six levels, the study adopted Japanese third-level, and the present is preparing 08 year Japanese first-level test as well as the TOEFL.
Sources of fund
My father is medical school's staff, and has own factory, mother is in the hospital nurse, their income is very stable, and studies abroad to me the matter supports very much. Will be arranging, to help me positively to be possible the next year to go to Japan to study smoothly.
Futurology plan and goal
Research project
The research goal aging of populations is the global tendency, our country aging advancement is speeding up unceasingly. The old age healthy question causes the government and the health policy-making organ attention more and more, must take the third-level prevention as the guidance, has the plan systematically to carry on the patient, the high-risk group and the healthy crowd manages, reduces the complication and the aggravation of disease as far as possible. Cuts the mortality rate is enhances the senior citizen to survive the quality major event. The reasonable meals, the multi-food green goods fruit, increases the meals textile fibre amount of radiation, the control body weight, the no-smoking, limits the liquor, should evade the mental strain, the attention psychology mental hygiene, overcomes does not move the bad psychology.
The research content one, the living conditions to old person psychological and the health influence, may divide into approximately according to the existing old person's life condition live alone in the old folks home, lives together with the spouse in the old folks home lives, lives alone, lives together with the spouse, lives alone with the children, with spouse together with children housing and so on six conditions. Because in the environment medical treatment facility's level and old person's psychology affects old person the quality of life, for example medical, nursing, the daily life care and the hygienic level high retirement organisation, can complete each kind of common disease, frequently-occurring disease's health education and the medical care, discovered early, diagnoses early, prevents disease to develop, and satisfies the senior citizen spirit to console the nationality and the psychological unblocking demand.
Two, the exercise, studies regarding the dementia sickness prevention. 1, improves the senior citizen quality of life, the recovery trains very important. Is advantageous in preventing to abandon and so on abandons with the amyotrophy with the syndrome production, causes the muscle and tendon abandoning luan shrinks with the nature is not easy to produce, prevents the body luan to shrink and the non-paralysis side amyotrophy effectively. At the same time, relieves to a certain extent the restlessness, prevented the old age to be despondent effectively and senile dementia sickness occurrence. 2, studies regarding the senile dementia recovery function.
Three, the health education regarding the senior citizen QOL enhancement's function, according to senior citizen's physiology, the psychology and the pathology characteristic, provides the effective health education, improves the old age patient's quality of life, raises the old age patient self-nursing ability, the prevention complication, reduces the patient family member and society's burden. From diet instruction, medication instruction, life style instruction, home nursing, psychological instruction, security behaviour instruction.
Above in order to complete the research project which conceives, I will study the old age concern diligently and so on related discipline, and will raise own language proficiency diligently, will strive for to achieve with old people communicates does not have the barrier, better will complete the research project
After graduation plan, after the graduation, I want to continue to study doctor the curriculum, or returning to homeland makes own contribution, according to situation decision.
Finally
Teacher, I thanks your patience to look this letter, I had known I am not Good university's graduate, our school is only a province is the Top university, and my Japanese proficiency is not high, but to express that my sincerity, I used Japanese to write this letter. Is only wants to let you see me in diligently, although does is also very insufficient, but the hope achieves well.
Thanks you once more.