帮忙看一下这2句话有什么语病吗?

Question

I cannot complete my masters degree requirements before enrolling in your esteemed university.
I cannot complete my master’s degree requirements by August this year.
这2句话有什么语病吗?请写下您的理解.我想知道我写的这2句话会不会给人造成歧义的感觉.
谢谢!
请写下您的中文翻译,谢谢!

我想表明,我去贵校报道时是拿不到硕士学位的,即,我是要退学的.不知道我写的句子有没有表明这些啊?

Answer 1

lz应该先提示下, 你本想表明什么意思...

1.I cannot complete my masters degree requirements before enrolling in your esteemed university. (此句不正确)

如果表达的意思:贵校录取我时, 我还没有拿到硕士学位.句子如下:
I have not completed the requirements for my Master's degree until I accepted by your university.

2.I cannot complete my master’s degree requirements by August this year.
此句子时态和表述都有问题, 应为

I will completed the requirements for my Master's Degree in August, this year.
句意是我将在今年八月拿到硕士学位.

Answer 2

不会

Answer 3

1，在我加入你们这个名校之前我还不能完成我的硕士学位。
2，我在今年八月之前不能完成我的硕士学位要求。
个人认为，这里面不应该用complete 应该用finish或者accomplish，还有就是master degree不用加‘s
没有拿到硕士学位应该是
I have not got a master degree when I enter your college