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On a green lawn in Paris, France, stands a "steel monster". I'm sure everyone knows that it is the world famous Eiffel Tower.
在法国巴黎的一片绿草地上，伫立着一座“钢铁怪物”，我想肯定人人都知道，它就是举世闻名的-----埃菲尔铁塔。
The Eiffel Tower, including the studio above, has four floors, more than 700 meters in total and more than 200 floors in height. When I walk to the bottom of the Eiffel Tower and look up at the tower, I seem to be a dwarf, waiting for the order of the leader of the steel giant.
埃菲尔铁塔算上上面的工作室，一共有4层,共700多米有200多层楼房那么高，走到埃菲尔铁塔的下方，仰望铁塔，我仿佛成了一个小矮人，等待着这钢铁巨人首领的命令。
Speaking of the Eiffel Tower, I think of the sightseeing elevator that can hold more than 30 people, which rises at an angle of 105 degrees. This elevator is like a train car. In front of the windshield of the car, there is a carved colored "driver". A rough look shows that this lifelike sculpture seems to be true.
说起埃菲尔铁塔，我就想起塔内在一个105度角上升的那个可容纳30多人的观光电梯。这一座电梯如同一节火车车厢，在“车厢”的档风玻璃前方有一个雕刻出来的彩色“驾驶员”，粗粗一看，这栩栩如生的雕塑好像真的一样。
来到第二层，我放眼望去，只见外面的房屋如同大海，那一座高高矮矮不一的楼房宛如大海上此起彼伏的波浪，再朝南俯视，优美的塞纳河穿城而过，在河上有无数座大桥，我回头一望，只面里面有一张海报。
When I came to the second floor, I looked out, and saw that the houses outside were like the sea, and that tall and short building was like the waves on the sea. Then I looked down to the south, and the beautiful Seine River passed through the city. There were countless bridges on the river. When I looked back, there was only a poster inside.
上面写的是埃菲尔铁塔的建造过程，主要内容是这样的：在建造埃菲尔铁塔时，没有起重机，完全是造一点，造一个台阶，埃菲尔铁塔有多高，楼梯就有多高，造完后再把楼梯拆掉的。
In my eyes, the Eiffel Tower in Paris is beautiful, magnificent, spectacular, magical and classic It has been standing on green grassland for five or six hundred years. It is the symbol of France and the crystallization of the wisdom of the French people.
在我眼中，巴黎埃菲尔铁塔是美丽的，是宏伟的，是壮观的，是神奇的，更是经典的……它矗立在绿油油的草地上，已经有五、六百年的历史了。它是法国的象征，更是法国人民智慧的结晶。
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正文：
On a green lawn in Paris, France, stands a "steel monster". I'm sure everyone knows that it is the world famous Eiffel Tower.
在法国巴黎的一片绿草地上，伫立着一座“钢铁怪物”，我想肯定人人都知道，它就是举世闻名的埃菲尔铁塔。
The Eiffel Tower, including the studio above, has four floors, more than 700 meters in total and more than 200 floors in height. When I walk to the bottom of the Eiffel Tower and look up at the tower, I seem to be a dwarf, waiting for the order of the leader of the steel giant.
埃菲尔铁塔算上上面的工作室，一共有4层，共700多米有200多层楼房那么高，走到埃菲尔铁塔的下方，仰望铁塔，我仿佛成了一个小矮人，等待着这钢铁巨人首领的命令。
Speaking of the Eiffel Tower, I think of the sightseeing elevator that can hold more than 30 people, which rises at an angle of 105 degrees. This elevator is like a train car. In front of the windshield of the car, there is a carved colored "driver". A rough look shows that this lifelike sculpture seems to be true.
说起埃菲尔铁塔，我就想起塔内在一个105度角上升的那个可容纳30多人的观光电梯。这一座电梯如同一节火车车厢，在“车厢”的档风玻璃前方有一个雕刻出来的彩色“驾驶员”，粗粗一看，这栩栩如生的雕塑好像真的一样。
来到第二层，我放眼望去，只见外面的房屋如同大海，那一座高高矮矮不一的楼房宛如大海上此起彼伏的波浪，再朝南俯视，优美的塞纳河穿城而过，在河上有无数座大桥，我回头一望，只面里面有一张海报。
When I came to the second floor, I looked out, and saw that the houses outside were like the sea, and that tall and short building was like the waves on the sea. Then I looked down to the south, and the beautiful Seine River passed through the city. There were countless bridges on the river. When I looked back, there was only a poster inside.
上面写的是埃菲尔铁塔的建造过程，主要内容是这样的：在建造埃菲尔铁塔时，没有起重机，完全是造一点，造一个台阶，埃菲尔铁塔有多高，楼梯就有多高，造完后再把楼梯拆掉的。
In my eyes, the Eiffel Tower in Paris is beautiful, magnificent, spectacular, magical and classic It has been standing on green grassland for five or six hundred years. It is the symbol of France and the crystallization of the wisdom of the French people.
在我眼中，巴黎埃菲尔铁塔是美丽的，是宏伟的，是壮观的，是神奇的，更是经典的……它矗立在绿油油的草地上，已经有五、六百年的历史了。它是法国的象征，更是法国人民智慧的结晶。
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