求英语作文：

Question

高一生活即将结束总结一下你高一的收获和不足同时期末考试即将来临你会怎样面对这次考试

Answer 1

你好，同学，很高兴回答你的问题

正确答案：

At the very end of my first year in high school, I has been working hard on my study under the intense pressure. I would like to say something to my parents, I am just too shy to express my feelings in front of you directly.
First of all, I want to thank you for provide me such good life and opportunities to study, I really treasure what you offer me. You are great parents. Yet I still have problems dealing with my school life and study. I hope that you can have more talks with me as to keep me in a good mood and try to help me when I need you most. I would not let you down, I have to prepare for the final exam. Chinese, math and English are the three subjects. I am not so good at math, so I must work hard. Every night, I spend little time on watching TV. Luckily, I don’t have much homework and I have enough time to review. I hope I can do a good job in the exam. And in the following years I will try my best to be excellent.

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Answer 2

Revsion of the answer from 中小学英语教师王广宇|合作机构：知道网友专家 你好，同学，很高兴回答你的问题

There are some errors in the original writing, 正确答案：

By the very end of my first year in high school, I have(has is wrong) been working hard on my study under the intense pressure. I would like to say something to my parents, I am just too shy to express my feelings in front of you directly.
First of all, I would like to thank you for providing me with all I need life and the opportunities to study, I really treasure what you have given me. You are great parents. Yet I still have problems in dealing with my school work. I hope that you can have more talks with me as to keep me in a good mood and try to help me when I need you most. I would not let you down, I have to prepare for the final exam. Chinese, math and English are the three subjects. I am not so good at math, so I must work hard. Every night, I spend little time on watching TV. Luckily, I don’t have much homework and I have enough time to review. I hope I can do a good job in the exam. And in the following years I will try my best to be excellent.