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昨天是你的奶奶72岁的生日,你和你的家人给她过了个开心、快乐的生日。早晨,你的妈妈为她煮了一碗面和两个鸡蛋。下午,你们去购物,为她买了一件漂亮的大衣。晚上,你们还为她准备了一顿特别的晚餐,你们唱生日歌,享受美食,过得很开心。
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如果用第一人称的话:
It was my grandmother's 72 years' birthday yesterday.I and my familiy went to gave her a happy and pleasant birthday.In the morning,my mother made her a bowl of noodles and two eggs.In the afternoon,we went to shoping and bought her a nice coat.At night,we prepared her a special dinner,we sang the Birthday Song to her,enjoyed the delicious food.We had a good time yesterday.
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第1个回答  2011-05-25
Yesterday it was my grandma's seventy-fifth birthday. My family and I made her happy.
In the morning, my mother cooked a bowl of noodles and two eggs. In the afternoon, we went shopping and bought her a beautiful jacket. In the evening we also prepared a special dinner for her. We sang the song happy birthday to her and enjoyed the delicious food. We had a good time.

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第2个回答  2011-05-25
完全第一人称。完全自己创作的,网上搜不到一样的。楼主请参考。
Yesterday was my grandmather's birthday. My family and I held an happy birthday party for her. During yesterday My grandmother had enjoyed herself very much. In that morning, my mother cooked a bowl of noodles with two fried eggs. In that afternoon, we went shopping and bought a very nice coat for her. In that evening, we arranged a special dinner for her. we sang the birthday songs, we enjoyed the wonderful food, and we all had a very good time.
第3个回答  2011-05-25
Yesterday was MY grandma 72 years old birthday, I and MYfamily to give her a happy birthday. Morning, MY mother as she cooked a noodles and two eggs. In the afternoon,I go shopping, for she bought a beautiful coat. At night,I also prepared her a special dinner, I sing a birthday song, enjoy cate, had a good time.
第4个回答  2011-05-25
A wonderful Day
Yesterday was my grandmother's 72nd birthday.My family and I planed to offer her a happy birthday.In the morning,my mother cooked a bowl of noodles with two eggs.Afternoon,we went to market to buy a beautiful coat for my grandmother.At night,we sang the birthday song for her and enjoyed the meal together.How a wonderful day !
第5个回答  2011-05-25
Yesterday was grandma‘s birthday of 72 years old .I and my family gave her a happy birthday. Morning, my mother cooked a noodles and two eggs for her. In the afternoon, we went shopping, bought a beautiful coat for her. At night, we prepared a special dinner for her.We sang a birthday song, enjoyed cate, had a good time.