我想要一篇英语作文 是有关旅游的,大概是这样的,在星期六的上午七点我们学校组织了一次自然公园的旅游,

到了自然公园的活动可以编一下,还有就是学生们会在沙滩上做游戏,还会在游泳,在午餐过后我们举行了英语故事竞赛,拍照并且在下午五点半返回了学校,整个一天下来我们大家都非常的开心。还有希望可以用到 go on a trip the natured park play games set out on the sands hold a comtest of 这几个短语 谢啦 如果答案我满意 我还会在最佳分数的!
追加悬赏 谢谢啦!

Last Saturday, with all my classmates and teachers, I went on a trip to the nature park . We departed from school at about half past seven and spent about 40 minutes travelling to our destination. When we first entered into the park, all of us were shocked by the natural beauty and the hamonized ecosystem of the park. Then, happily we were playing games on the sand; swimming in the pool and taking with our friends on the grassplot. After lunch break, our programs were continued with an contest of story narating held and each of us was immerging within the funny stories We left the part at about 5 o'clock, and unitl now, most of us are still haunted by the beautiful memory of that trip.
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第1个回答  2011-08-18
Saturday morning at seven o 'clock our school organized a tourism to a natural park.After we set out,We playing games on the beach, and swimming.After lunch we held a contest of englinsh, taking pictures and 5:30 in the afternoon returned to school, the whole day down we all very happy! 其他的按自己的想法多少添加些
第2个回答  2011-08-18
Our school organised an activity. In the morning on Saturday I went on a trip to the nature park with my classmates. We set out at seven o'clock. When we got the park, we had a race to have a competation. In the end our team won the first. Then we played games on the sands and had a swim. After lunch, we held a contest of English and took photos. Then we went back to our school at 5:00 pm. During the whole day we had a good time. It was an unforgettable day for me.
满意吧?记得要采纳的吆
第3个回答  2011-08-19
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