英语菜鸟紧急求助!

上边留了篇英语作文,好不容易写出来了,但肯定错误不少,麻烦各位给看看吧!!!有什么拼写和语法错误麻烦给改一改,可能错误有不少,麻烦各位高手给看看了!摆脱了!!!

We should make efforts to master English,because study English is go with the current of the times and we often need English to exchange.But we always find that we pay the time but haven't a maked effect.So we need the ways to improve English.
According to my personal understanding,I think that we should remember a wealth of words,because English are always based on word.When we master a lot of words,we can listing and speaking English.
Of course ,learn English not only remember word but also speak English as more as possible.To master a language you need much practice.So we should often exchange in English.It is good for improve in our English.
Besides this,we can listen or sing English song、see film and so on.Through them you will interested in English.
In a word,through remember word and much practice can help us to study English.Of course,learning English need own hard.For these way you might as well have a try.

We should make efforts to master( change-enjoy) English,because study(change-studying) English is go(change is go-goes) with the current of the times (of the times--works we had made)and we often need (to use)English to exchange.But we always find that we pay the time but haven't a maked effect.(but we always find out that what we had done, including our time, do not works perfectly)So we need the(without the) ways to improve (our ability of)English.
According to my personal understanding,I think that we should remember a(change-the) wealth (change-importance//wealth is used for social isues)of words,because English are always based on word(words).When we master(try to remember) a lot of words,we can (remember them by)listing and speaking English.
Of course ,learn (learning)English not only(to) remember word(words) but also speak(speaking) English as more(ofen) as possible.To master(use a language ) a language you need much(change- much-you need to) practice.So we should often exchange in English.It is good for improving our English.
Besides this,we can listen or sing English song、see film and so on.Through them you will (be)interested in English.
In a word,through remember(remembering) word and much(more) practice can help us to study English.Of course,learning English need own hard(your own hard work).For these way you might as well have a try.

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