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如题所述

等你, 在雨中, 在造虹的雨中
蝉声沉落, 蛙声升起
一池的红莲如红焰, 在雨中

你来不来都一样, 竟感觉
每朵莲都像你
尤其隔着黄昏, 隔着这样的细雨

永恒, 刹那, 刹那, 永恒
等你, 在时间之外在时间之内,
等你, 在刹那, 在永恒

如果你的手在我的手里, 此刻
如果你的清芬
在我的鼻孔, 我会说, 小情人

诺, 这只手应该采莲, 在吴宫
这只手应该
摇一柄桂浆, 在木兰舟中

一颗星悬在科学馆的飞檐
耳坠子一般的悬着
瑞士表说都七点了 忽然你走来

步雨后的红莲, 翩翩, 你走来
像一首小令
从一则爱情的典故里你走来
从姜白石的词里, 有韵地, 你走来

看过好多关于这首诗的评论,印象最深的是一篇关于科学馆和瑞士表那阕如何精彩的文字,说是古典与现代结合云云,不过,个人认为,这两个意象的出现也许就是这首诗唯一的败笔,西装和瓜皮帽的搭配让人看着怎么也不舒服。
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第1个回答  2014-05-11
One morning, a rabbit and a tortoise meet in a forest, so they begin to talk.   

H: Good morning. Mr. Tortoise.
T: Mr. Rabbit. Good morning!
H: What are you doing?
T: I'm running.
H: Running? Ha ha ha! Can you run? Your legs are too short!
T: Of course I can.
H: But my legs are long. I can run faster than you.
T: Don't be so sure.
H: Let's run to the tall tree over there. Let's see who can win.
T: All right. Ready? Go!
A. Mr. Tortoise goes very slowly. But Mr. Rabbit runs very fast. Soon she comes to a small tree.
H: Where is Mr. Tortoise? Aha! She is far behind me. How slow she is! Mmm. it's so hot! Here is a tree. I'll have a short sleep first.
T: Oh, she is sleeping under the tree there. But I can't stop. I must go on.
H: Ah! What a nice sleep! Let me go on. Oh, where’s Mr. Tortoise? Where is she now? I must hurry.
A: Soon she runs to the tall tree. Mr. Tortoise is sitting under the tree and waiting for him.
T: Hi, Mr. Rabbit! How are you? I win. Who is faster, Mr. Rabbit, you or me?
H: Oh...
第2个回答  2011-11-20
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妈妈 我爱您

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爱您伟岸的身躯

是您 让我呼吸到世上清新的空气
是您 让我感受到人间温暖的情意

妈妈 我爱您
爱您粗糙的双手
爱您关心的话语

是您让我看到美丽的风景
是您让我听到悠扬的歌曲

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第4个回答  2011-11-20
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