一篇英语日记 自己过生日的题目或和平常不一样的事，用过去式写的，带翻译，谢谢！

Question

很急啊！

Answer 1

Sunday,Sept.24st Sunny
Yesterday was my birthday. My parents had a birthday party for me and my good friends came to the party. My parents bought lots of food and drinks for us and my friends brought many presents for me. There was a big cake with some candles on the table. We all sat around the cake and I blew candles out in one breath. We sang,danced and played games. We were very happy yesterday.

星期天，24日 晴
昨天是我的生日。我的父母为我举行了一个生日派对，我的好朋友都来了。父母买了许多吃的喝的给我们，朋友们也带来了许多礼物给我。桌上有一个插着蜡烛的大蛋糕。我们都坐在蛋糕旁，我一口气吹灭了蜡烛。我们唱歌，跳舞，玩游戏。昨天我们都非常开心。

这是我自己写的，不懂再问我，望采纳追问

能不能内容再多一点呢(⊙o⊙)？

追答

Sunday,Sept.24st Sunny
Yesterday was my birthday. My parents had a birthday party for me and my good friends came to the party. My parents bought lots of food and drinks for us and my friends brought many presents for me. There was a big cake with some candles on the table. We all sat around the cake and I blew candles out in one breath. I made a silent wish and then they sang a birthday song for me. We talked ,danced and played games. We were very happy yesterday.

星期天，24日 晴
昨天是我的生日。我的父母为我举行了一个生日派对，我的好朋友都来了。父母买了许多吃的喝的给我们，朋友们也带来了许多礼物给我。桌上有一个插着蜡烛的大蛋糕。我们都坐在蛋糕旁，我一口气吹灭了蜡烛。我默默许了一个愿，然后他们为我唱了一首生日歌。我们交谈，跳舞，玩游戏。昨天我们都非常开心。

加了一点句子，应该够了
楼主满意的话就采纳了吧。

Answer 2

Sundry Oct.23 sunny
today is my birthday. i'm very happy,because my good friends and relative(亲戚)are coming today,l can paly with them.my mother is making a cake for me.the cake is big and nice,i like it very much.i receive many presonts frommyiends relatives,and i like those very much. i think i have a good birthday今天是我的生日，我很开心，因为我的亲戚和朋友都会来为我庆祝，我可以和他们一起玩，我妈妈正在为我做蛋糕，这蛋糕又大又漂亮，我很喜欢它。我收到来自我亲人的礼物，我非常喜欢他。

Answer 3

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