急求高手写一篇英语征文。写得好绝对送分。 我要参加英语演讲比赛,时间大概是三四分钟。

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文章主题是“坚持”,大概内容是为了就改掉不能坚持的毛病,我每天晨跑,后来…………(自由发挥)我终于坚持了下来。再加一段议论。要求是:高中水平,句式多变换。非常感谢。

I have a friend Monty Roberts who owns a horse ranch (牧马场) in San Ysidro. When he was a senior, he was asked to write a paper about what he wanted to be and do when he grew up.
The next day he handed it in to the teacher. On the front was a large red F. The boy with the dream asked, “Why did I receive an F?”
The teacher said, “This is an unrealistic dream for a young boy like you. You have no money. You come from an itinerant(四处奔波的)family. You have no resources. Owning a horse ranch requires a lot of money. You have to buy the land. You have to pay for the original breeding stock and later you’ll have to pay large stud fees. There’s no way you could ever do it.”
He stated, “You can keep the F but I’ll keep my dream.”
The best part of the story is that two summers ago that same schoolteacher brought 30 kids to camp out on his ranch for a week. When the teacher was leaving, he said, “Look, Monty, I can tell you this now. When I was your teacher, I was something of a dream stealer. During those years I stole a lot of kids’ dreams. Fortunately you had enough belief not to give up on yours.”

By 兰银清
This passage tells us that Monty Roberts, who had such strong belief that he stuck to his dream all the time, eventually succeeded in owning a horse ranch.
Belief always plays an important role in our life. Those who stick to their belief will do what they can to achieve success. They may come across difficulties, but they have enough courage to overcome them and even if they fail, they can learn something . On the contrary, those without strong belief might succeed if lucky. However, once difficulties arise, they will give up easily and become a complete failure.
Belief is so important that it can change one’s fate. J.K Rowling, now one of the richest women in England, is a good example. Before Harry Potter was pulished, she lived a very poor life. She was divorced and had no job. However, hard life didn’t beat her. She firmly believed that she was a genius for writing stories . With such strong belief, she kept writing and succeeded. Another good examle is Adison. How could he have invented the light bulb, if he hadn’t done the experiment for 10001 times?
From my point of view, life is not full of roses , so those with firmly-held belief are more likely to get successful and master their own fates.
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第1个回答  2011-10-31
Hi, i;m not going to answer your question,my friend, because i believe if you write the passage by yourself, it will be easier for you too remember and express your own feeling. The speech contest is not just about the language itself, but also the speaker. In my point of view, the latter is more important. So, write it by yourself.
第2个回答  2011-10-30
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