求外国爱情诗。好像是叶芝的《柳园里》翻译，但是和其他的什么古典版什么的翻译不同，语句很优美，很有余

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求外国爱情诗。好像是叶芝的《柳园里》翻译，但是和其他的什么古典版什么的翻译不同，语句很优美，很有余韵。在意林合订本出现的，好像是2011年的，《你说，后来》和它在同一期

Answer 1

Down by the Salley Garden - William Butler Yeats
Down by the Salley Gardens，My love and I did meet 我和我的爱人曾约会在柳园
She passed the Salley Gardens，With little snow-white feet 我看着她纤细雪足莲步翩翩
She bid me take love easy，As the leaves grow on the tree 她约定我和她要像绿叶和树一样依偎相恋
But I being young and foolish， With her did not agree 但我是如此年轻而无知拒绝了她的浪漫
In a field by the river ，My love and I did stand　我和我的爱人曾一起站在一望无际的河畔
And on my leaning shoulder，She laid her snow-white hand 她温柔嫩白的手搭在我微倾的单肩，
She bid me take life easy，As the grass grows on the weirs 她祈祷我们的生命要像河堰上的嫩草一样新鲜
But I was young and foolish，And now am full of tears 但我是如此年轻而无知 现在泪水溢出我的双眼
Down by the Salley Gardens，My love and I did meet 我和我的爱人曾约会在柳园
She passed the Salley Gardens，With little snow-white feet 我看着她纤细雪足莲步翩翩
She bid me take love easy，As the leaves grow on the tree 她约定我和她要像绿叶和树一样依偎相恋
But I being young and foolish　 With her did not agree 但我是如此年轻而无知拒绝了她的浪漫
But I was young and foolish，And now am full of tears　但我是如此年轻而无知，现在泪水溢出我的双眼追答

中国风译版
Down by the salley gardens my love and I did meet;斯遇佳人，仙苑重深
She passed the salley gardens with little snow-white feet.玉人雪趾，往渡穿林
She bid me take love easy, as the leaves grow on the tree;瞩我适爱，如叶逢春
But I, being young and foolish, with her would not agree.我愚且顽，负此明言
In a field by the river my love and I did stand,斯水之畔，与彼曾伫
And on my leaning shoulder she laid her snow-white hand.比肩之处，玉手曾拂
She bid me take life easy, as the grass grows on the weirs;嘱我适世，如荇随堰
But I was young and foolish, and now I am full of tears.惜我愚顽，唯余泣叹！

追问

和这些版本都不一样

追答

在莎莉花园深处，吾爱与我曾经相遇她穿越莎莉花园，以雪白的小脚她嘱咐我要爱得轻松，当新叶在枝桩萌芽但我当年年幼无知，不予轻率苟同在河边的田野，吾爱与我曾经驻足她依靠在我的肩膀，以雪白的小手她嘱咐我要活得轻松，当青草在堤岸滋长但我当年年幼无知，而今热泪盈

追问

虽然和印象
的不同，不过算你狠

追答

.哈哈