请高手帮忙翻译成英文 万分感谢

老师您好
很高兴收到您的e-mail,很感谢您在百忙之中阅读我的申请资料。我现在只有CET4的成绩,正在准备雅思考试,并且一定会在入学前达到语言要求。
我很喜欢某某专业,非常希望能够在某某大学继续深造。希望您可以给我一张conditional offer,我会尽早把雅思成绩发给您。

第1个回答  2010-03-26
Dear teacher,
So happy to recieve the email from you, thank you for looking at my application in your precious time. I only have got CET4 mark but I am praparing for my English test and I will meet the language requirement before entering school.
I do like .... course and I hope that I can study deeply in it at .... university. I hope you can give me a conditional offer, I will give you my English mark as soon as possible.

记得给分啊~~

谢谢啦!!
第2个回答  2010-03-26
Dear Mr/Mrs. xx,

I'm glad to receive your reply, and thanks for taking time to read my application. Right now I only have CET4 score, and am about to take the IELTS, but I'll definitely meet the language requirement before school starts.

I'd like to be majoring in xxx, and I'd wish to be admitted by xxx. I hope you could send me a conditional offer. I'll send you the IELTS score as soon as possible.
第3个回答  2010-03-26
Dear teacher:
I'm really appreciated of receiving your e-mail and thank you for reading my application form. though now i only have the result of CET4, but i've prepared for IELTS, and i will try my best to reach the language requrest before the entrance.
I'm keen on ****, and really looking forward to advance further education in ****. i'm sincerely wished you could give me a conditional offer,i'll give you the result of IELTS as soon as possible.
第4个回答  2010-03-26
Dear Officer,
I am really happy to receive your email, and I really appreciate your time for reading my application materials. Though I have the CET4 certificate only, I am preparing for the IELTS test, and I promise you I will get a satisfactory result regarding the language requirement for entrying the college.
I am really interested in XXX, and I hope to have a further development in XX uni.
I will be really appreciate if you can give me a conditional offer, and I will send you the IELTS result as soon as possible.本回答被网友采纳